"The detail captured and structure you’ve used to present information for this section works well. You’ve captured a lot of detail about how people interact with each other, their objects (e.g., menus, phones), and their environment. That’s great! "
"Reflection: Lots of detail in the reflection; overall very strong. "
"Emergent themes Actionable and clear; very good."
"Actionable and thoughtful work here. Lots of detail."